雅思口语 Part 2&3 - [保留题目] - 你引以为豪的照片

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Part 2

Describe a photo you took and you are proud of.

You should say:

When you took it

Where you took it

What is in this photo

And explain why you are proud of it

我的录音

I’d like to talk about a photo I took about two years ago during a solo trip to the west of China. I took it early one morning while hiking in a remote mountainous area, just as the sun was rising.

during a solo trip 在一次独自旅行中

mountainous adj. /ˈmaʊntɪnəs/ 多山的；山地的

The photo captures a narrow path winding through the mountains, with layers of peaks fading into the distance. In the foreground, there’s a single figure — myself — standing still, facing the sunrise. The light was soft rather than dramatic, and the colours were muted, which gave the whole image a calm and slightly introspective atmosphere.

capture verb 捕捉；记录（画面、瞬间、情绪）

The photo captures…（摄影类万能句首）

wind through 蜿蜒穿过

with layers of peaks fading into the distance 山峰一层层向远方延伸，逐渐隐没在视线中

foreground noun

/ˈfɔːrɡraʊnd/ the foreground

[countable, usually singular] the part of a view, picture, etc. that is nearest to you when you look at it（景物、图画等的）前景

The figure in the foreground is the artist's mother.图画前景中的人是画家的母亲。

stand still 站着不动

sunrise noun 日出

The light was soft rather than dramatic 光线是柔和的，而非强烈戏剧化的

muted adj. (of colours, light, etc.色彩、光亮等) not bright暗淡的；不明亮的

give the whole image a calm and slightly introspective atmosphere 让整张照片呈现出一种平静、略带自省的氛围

“略带自省的”指的是一种温和、不张扬的内省状态，不是强烈的情绪，而是一种安静地向内思考自己的感受、经历或人生阶段的感觉。

introspective /ˌɪntrəˈspektɪv/ tending to think a lot about your own thoughts, feelings, etc. 好内省的；好反省的

I’m proud of this photo not because it’s technically perfect, but because it represents a moment of independence and self-reflection. At that time, I was going through a period of uncertainty in my life, and taking that photo reminded me that I was capable of moving forward on my own. For me, it’s less about the image itself and more about the meaning behind it.

self-reflection 自我反思；内省

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Part 2 — 官方标准逐项评分解析

1️⃣ Fluency & Coherence — Band 9

全程自然展开，无“找词型停顿”

时间 → 场景 → 内容 → 抽象意义，叙述层级清晰

使用自然的口语衔接结构：

not because…, but because…
For me, it’s less about… and more about…

✅ 完全符合“延展充分、逻辑自然”的 9 分描述

2️⃣ Lexical Resource — Band 9

具体描写 + 抽象概念并存：

solo trip / remote mountainous area
muted colours / introspective atmosphere
independence / self-reflection / uncertainty

情绪词克制、不夸张，非常接近母语者表达习惯

✅ 属于高密度但不炫技的 9 分词汇

3️⃣ Grammatical Range & Accuracy — Band 9

自然使用：

时间状语从句（just as the sun was rising）
非限定性评价结构
对比与强调句式

句式长短交替，信息焦点明确

无任何影响理解的语法问题

4️⃣ Pronunciation（考试表现层面）— 可稳定 8.5–9

若你在实考中做到：

mountainous / uncertainty / introspective 重音准确

not because… but because… 有明显对比重音

结尾句自然降调

👉 发音评分不会成为短板

🔧 针对你口语的关键提升建议（非常重要）

✅ 1. “骄傲”的原因一定要抽象升维

不要只说：

I’m proud because it looks nice.

而要像示范中这样：

It represents a moment of independence and self-reflection.

👉 情绪 → 经历 → 价值，这是 9 分核心逻辑

✅ 2. 避免“摄影技术型废话”

IELTS 不考摄影参数：

少说 angle / pixels / resolution

多说 meaning / memory / stage of life

✅ 3. Part 2 结尾必须“拔高”

最后 1–2 句一定要：

抽离具体照片

回到 人生 / 成长 / 认知

这是 8 分和 9 分的决定性差别

Part 3

Why do some people like to record important things by photos?

我的答案

Because photos allow people to preserve moments in a visual and immediate way. Unlike memories, which fade over time, photographs can trigger emotions and details that might otherwise be forgotten. They also make it easier to share personal experiences with others.

What can people learn from historical photographs?

我的答案

Historical photographs offer insights into daily life, social values, and major events of the past. They help people understand how societies have changed over time, often in ways that written records cannot fully capture.

Is taking a photo the best way to remember something?

我的答案

Not necessarily. Photos are effective for capturing visual details, but they don’t always preserve emotions or thoughts. In some cases, experiences remembered through reflection or storytelling can be more meaningful than images alone.

Which is better, taking photos or keeping a diary?

我的答案

They serve different purposes. Photos record what something looked like, while diaries capture what a person felt or thought. Ideally, combining both provides a more complete record of an experience.

When do people take photos?

我的答案

People usually take photos during meaningful moments, such as holidays, celebrations, or personal milestones. However, many also take photos of ordinary life as a way to document everyday experiences.

Why do some people like to keep old photos?

我的答案

Old photos help people maintain a connection with their past. They serve as reminders of important relationships and life stages, and they often carry emotional value that increases over time.