雅思口语 Part 2&3 - [新增题目] - 擅长音乐的朋友

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问题

Describe a friend of yours who is good at music/singing.

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Who he/she is

When/Where you listen to his/her music/singing

What kind of music/songs he/she is good at

And explain how you feel when listening to his music/singing

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I'd like to talk about my close friend Sarah, who has an incredible singing voice. I've known her since university, and she's always been passionate about music.

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have an incredible singing voice 有令人惊叹的歌喉

I usually listen to her sing during our weekend gatherings at her apartment. She has this small corner set up with a guitar and keyboard where she loves to perform for friends. Sometimes we also go to local open mic nights where she showcases her talent to a wider audience.

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open mic noun /ˌəʊpən ˈmaɪk/ (also open mike) [uncountable] an occasion in a club when anyone can sing, play music or tell jokes 即兴表演式聚会（出席者都可上台唱歌、演奏或表演滑稽说笑）

open-mic night 开放式麦克风之夜

Sarah excels at acoustic pop and folk music. She has this warm, soothing voice that's perfect for artists like Taylor Swift's acoustic versions or Ed Sheeran's style songs. She also writes her own lyrics, which often reflect personal experiences and emotions, making her performances feel incredibly authentic and heartfelt.

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excel at sth /ɪkˈsel/ 擅长某事

acoustic pop /əˈkuːstɪk pɒp/ 原声流行音乐

acoustic adj. [usually before noun] (of a musical instrument or performance乐器或演奏) designed to make natural sound, not sound amplified (= made louder) by electrical equipment 原声的；自然声的

folk music 民谣音乐

soothing 抚慰人心的；舒缓的

Ed Sheeran /ɛd ˈʃɪərən/ 英国流行歌手、创作歌手和吉他手

authentic adj. 真实的；真诚的

heartfelt adj. 真挚的；发自内心的

Whenever I listen to Sarah sing, I feel completely relaxed and uplifted. There's something magical about her voice that just washes away all my stress and worries. Her performances always create this intimate, cozy atmosphere that brings everyone together. It's like having a private concert with someone you care about. I genuinely believe she has what it takes to pursue music professionally, and I always encourage her to keep sharing her gift with the world.

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uplifted adj. 心情振奋的；鼓舞的

she has what it takes to … 她有能力做…；她具备做…的条件

ChatGPT评价

我来帮你分析这篇范文，从雅思口语评分标准出发（流利度与连贯性、词汇、语法、发音），并整理表达。

1️⃣ 评分（按照雅思口语标准，满分9分）

评分项	参考分数	评语
流利度与连贯性	8.5	回答自然，逻辑清晰，信息连贯。衔接词少了些，可用 “in addition”, “also”, “what’s more” 让语篇更丰富。
词汇资源	8.5	用词丰富（soothing, heartfelt, uplifted, authentic），有一定高分词汇，但可以再加一些多样化的动词或形容词表达感受或技能。
语法范围与准确性	8.0	语法总体准确，句型以简单复合句为主，可增加一些复杂从句（如非限定性定语从句、倒装、分词结构）提升句法多样性。
发音	8.0	文字版无法评判实际发音，但句子长度和词汇适合自然发音。

总分：约 8.0–8.5

不算满分，但已经属于非常高水平。

2️⃣ 修改意见（提高到9分的潜力）

(1) 流利度与衔接

原文衔接简单，多用 “and”, “also”。可增加更多衔接词：

“Moreover, …”, “In addition, …”, “What’s more, …”

示例修改：

I usually listen to her sing during our weekend gatherings at her apartment. Moreover, we sometimes attend local open mic nights where she showcases her talent to a wider audience.

(2) 语法多样性

增加分词结构、倒装、非限定性定语从句：

原句："She has this warm, soothing voice that's perfect for artists like Taylor Swift's acoustic versions or Ed Sheeran's style songs."
可改为：

She has this warm, soothing voice, reminiscent of acoustic versions by Taylor Swift or songs by Ed Sheeran, which makes her performances feel deeply authentic.